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  • February 17, 2004, 2:35pm

This is somewhat off-topic and irrelevant, but the interesting thing about Derrida's use of language is that, though he is "careful", he is deliberately imprecise, because he wants to convey the idea that no word can precisely be fixed to a specific definition. In this sense, those two words you refer to (by the way, which book are they from?) may actually mean the same thing, just as he invented so many different words for "differance".

Hi Earl,

I'm not sure if I get what you are saying. By "conjunctive phrase", I suppose you mean the same thing Nathan is referring to. In other words, wind and drizzle are independent phrases, rather than a set or pair. So, with the example of apple and orange which is correct? Or are both correct?

From what you guys are saying, if I wrote:
There was an apple and an orange.
I'm implying:
There was an apple, and there was an orange.

But if I mean to see them as a pair, wouldn't it be correct to say:
There were an apple and an orange.

In that sense, I would imagine that "cold wind" and "intermittent drizzle" were happening concurrently.

Also, what if I reversed the sentence:
A cold wind and an intermittent drizzle were there.
In this case, you certain would not use "was", would you?

The Reality

  • March 18, 2003, 5:53pm

Thanks Wynne. I fixed the quotation marks. I'm aware of the rules of quotation marks, but I keep forgetting. I just think it looks so much better when commas and periods are outside of quotes, especially when you list them in sequence.

Matching the tense

  • February 6, 2003, 3:03pm

Hi Ian L,

I'm confused.

Since I am NOT focused on when McD is good, are you suggesting that I write: "I argued that McDonald's was good for you."

But then, I do mean to say that it is universally true, in which case you say the tenses do not have to match.

If I am not focused on WHEN, that makes it more universal (not specific to any point in time). For instance:

I argued that stealing is bad.

Here naturally I mean to say it is bad universally, not now, not then, but always. Thus it is a universal statement, and (therefore) it does not focus on WHEN.

A Few Too Few

  • November 14, 2002, 5:20pm

Here is my take:

"Few" means small number.
As in: "there were very few people in the theater."
"A few" means 2 or 3.
As in: "there were only a few people in the theater."

How old am I?

  • November 14, 2002, 5:18pm

My take on it is:
You are a 38 year old man.
And.
You are 38 years old.
When "year old" is a modifier to "man", it's singular.

Where are the commas?

  • November 13, 2002, 7:42pm

I actually feel that Strunk's suggestion is superior, especially in the cases like:

"You can buy 3 different kinds of film for your camera: slide, black and white, and negative."

If you always omitted the comma before "and", then you end up with:
"slide, black and white and negative" which is confusing.

Where are the commas?

  • November 12, 2002, 11:21am

Now, this is interesting. Everyone I spoke to in the past about this told me not to put comma before "and". But according to Strunk's Elements of Style, "In a series of three or more terms with a single conjunction, use a comma after each term except the last." See the examples on this page:
http://www.bartleby.com/141/strunk.html

Matching Numbers

  • November 12, 2002, 10:20am

"These computers EACH come with a 40GB drive"
When you put "each", you don't need to make the verb singular? i.e. "comes".

A position followed by a company name

  • November 11, 2002, 4:13pm

The example was misleading. Kinsella is a last name of a person. AS&E is the name of the company. So the question really is:
Which is correct:
"AS&E chief technology officer Joseph Callerame usher me into ..."
Or
"The AS&E chief technology officer Joseph Callerame usher me into ..."

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A Part of ... November 7, 2002
What is / What are November 8, 2002
A lot of water November 10, 2002
Future November 10, 2002
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Matching Numbers November 11, 2002
Control November 13, 2002
Letter A November 16, 2002
lack of “a” November 16, 2002
Multi-disciplinary November 21, 2002
a shit November 21, 2002
Emotionality November 21, 2002
Two Weeks Notice November 27, 2002
Gone to Seed November 29, 2002
Off His Rocker November 29, 2002
“got the best of him” November 29, 2002
hit a snag November 29, 2002
Potboiler November 29, 2002
Went to extremes November 29, 2002
Five of Ten November 30, 2002
Over-the-counter December 1, 2002
Motives vs. Motivation December 10, 2002
In and of itself December 12, 2002
Down to the Wire December 17, 2002
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Fried Chicken December 23, 2002
Perturb vs. Disturb January 3, 2003
Social vs. Societal January 11, 2003
Sheep, Fish, and Cattle January 17, 2003
Decades January 23, 2003
Taking sides February 5, 2003
Matching the tense February 5, 2003
ON the Lower East Side February 11, 2003
Value February 18, 2003
20 Something March 18, 2003
The Reality March 18, 2003
Commas, Periods, and Quotation Marks March 18, 2003
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Email May 8, 2003
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Spaces After Period June 12, 2003
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A Jew and Jews September 21, 2003
Either Is or Am October 2, 2003
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Color of People August 6, 2004
Murphy’s Law December 3, 2004
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Life Savers 5 Flavor March 18, 2005
First Generation vs. Second Generation December 18, 2005
Paraphrase May 4, 2006
“The Official Dictionary of Unofficial English” July 16, 2006
Quarters September 13, 2006
Feeling concern September 13, 2006
Materialism January 25, 2007
Ass February 8, 2007
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Do’s and Don’t's September 30, 2007
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